영작한 것 좀 봐주세요 ;;;

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신발 쇼핑몰에서 주문한게 캔슬이길래

카드 뱉었나보다 ...하고 다른 곳에서 주문했더니

오늘 보니 신용카드는 승인이 난거잇죠 ㅠㅠ

이렇게 편지를 쓰면 될까요?

미리 감사드립니다 꾸벅~

 

Dear Shoebuy.com,

I am writing this e-mail with regard to Order No.12345

The purchase was made on May,24 and, shortly after that date,
your records showed that the order was cancelled by any reason
So I ordered same shoes from another site
But today I checked my credit card proved
 I want you to cancel the approval of my credit card payment
for my order. Thanks in advance.

[________]

Dear Shoebuy.com,

I am writing this e-mail with regard to Order No. 12345.

I made the purchase on May 24.
Shortly after that, however, your records showed that my order was cancelled for some reason.
So I ordered the same shoes from another site.
But today I checked my credit card and found that the purchase I made on May 24 from your site was approved.
I want you to cancel the approval of my credit card payment for the purchase.
Thanks in advance.




== 원글님이 했던 영작에 가급적 조금만 손 댔습니당. 도움이 될지 모르겠어욤. 요즘 공부하는 mind가 아니라서 ==

[rollipop]

I am writing to ask you to cancel my order on May 24. My order number is 12345.
When I ordered the item at your website, it said that my order was not approved. Depending on your website information, I made another purchase at other website.
Today I found a charge on my credit card from your company. Please cancel the order as soon as possible. I'd appreciate it if you confirm my request by reply. Thank you.

[원글]

어이쿠 두분이나... 감사합니다 ㅠㅠ
덕분에 잘 보냈구요... 즐거운 연휴 되세용........ ^_^