영어 맞는지 확인부탁드려요.

[부끄부끄]

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(사유: 프로젝터 램프 수명이 다되서 작동안되니 미팅을 못함)

콩글리쉬로 영작해서 ㅠㅠ
영어 잘하시는분들 틀린 부분 좀 고쳐주세요~

꿀꿀한 금요일이지만, 내일 주말이니 다들 화이팅입니다!
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We need to change new lamp of projector in the meeting room.
The lamp's life is nearly run, so we can not use it at the meeting.
This is an urgent item that needs to approve from GFM.

Please excuse my urgent request, and approve the order  as soon as possible.

[현만이]

We need to change the lamp of the projector in the meeting room.
The lamp is out of order, so we can not operate the projector for the meeting.
This is an urgent item that needs to be approved from GFM.

Please excuse my urgent request, and approve the order as soon as possible.

[부끄부끄]

감사합니다!!! 복많이 받으셔요..

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--->Please excuse my urgent request, and approve the order as soon as possible.

---> Please forgive us making our urgent request, and let us know the status of our order as soon as you can